Plot Woes

Whoops. I lied. I guess this story had a few more pages in it after all. I was rereading the beginning and it occurred to me that it made several promises that I hadn't kept, so I went back to the end and tried to figure out a way to make it less final. The scenes are short, but I'm on the fourth already and I think I might need a fifth and sixth. Eek. On the other hand, I got a surprise!supporting character who I love.

If anyone is reading these entries and curious about the story itself, junetide starts anonymous posting on the 21st, and reveals are sometime in July. I don't even want to say how many page it is (too many!) until then, because it's supposed to be a surprise.